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January 2008 
On my way to work....
Posted on Nov 28th, 2007
by 
Vijay
Vijay
These are some of my thoughts, experiences in the form of Haiku, on my way to work. It takes about an hour one way. These obviously don't follow the 5-7-5 rule :-(
I'm dedicating this post to Anna Dani, who taught me to see positive things, however small, even in seemingly difficult situations. Thank you so much, Anna.
I'm dedicating this post to Anna Dani, who taught me to see positive things, however small, even in seemingly difficult situations. Thank you so much, Anna.
In the bus (1)
I smell their breath
and they, mine;
Jampacked.
In the bus (2)
He yells; She yells;
They all yell;
Chaos.
Dig them; then close them;
Aaah, finished?
Line one, again.
Nothing personal, just business
24 hour hospital
Please fall sick,
we need business :-)
I wave to her,
she waves back.
sweet innocence.
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I love reading your haikus, thanks for these - each has its own atmosphere - they definitely make me feel like I was also sitting on the bus - no need to go to Chennai any more - it feels as if I have been there already :-)
Thanks for the dedication - hmmm - not sure if I deserve it …. but happy if I manage to give some tips to others through writing about my own experiences.
I love this. So true.
“Nothing personal, just business
24 hour hospital
Please fall sick,
we need business :-)”
Thank you Amy, I'm so glad you liked it :-)